Monday, May 13, 2013

Tuesday, May 14th

Do Now: 

  1. Think about what questions you have when you hear the words "college application."
  2. Prepare to discuss.
SWBAT:

  1. Better understand the common Application.
  2. Begin to understand the common application essay.
  3.  http://www.wimp.com/myvoice/
Homework:

  1. Based on yesterday's video, your essay/draft # 1 is due on Thursday.  Remember, this can be handwritten or typed.  This does not get posted on our blog.
Before college essay writing, let's congratulate Sana for her award winning essay, "Taking the Stairs, Two at a Time."  She will be attending an award dinner at UCONN tonight!
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Taking the Stairs, Two at a Time

By: Sana Suhail

When my grandmother died, no one was there to hear her last words. But I am pretty sure she called out my name once or twice. My grandmother came to live with us five years ago. I remember sitting on the beaten-down couch of our apartment, struggling with my English homework, when my aunt called from back home. “Brother,” she cried desperately to Father, “Mother is in a critical stage, I have no money for her treatment, please take care of her. I beg of you.” My father got off the phone, crossed to the small tin box we kept in the kitchen, took out our savings, and started counting them. My mother argued with him about how long we had struggled to make our ends meet and how we would never be able to buy a car if he just kept wasting their hard earned money. But two months later, my father and I were on our way to LaGuardia to pick up my grandmother and welcome her to the Land of Opportunity.  

The first day she was here, we sat her down on my bed, propping her small, fragile body upright with pillows. My father left for work earlier than usual that day, but I knew deep inside that he was saddened to see Grandmother so weak. My mother and I spent that day buying her medicine and making her soup. She was hesitant to speak, because of her hacking cough and persistent wheezing. But when she did, it would be the same few lines: “Where am I?” and “Take me back.” Eventually, my mother retuned back to her job and I returned back to middle school. I despised every day I had to go that wretched school. The teachers snickered under their breaths when I couldn’t understand what they asked, my classmates threw wet paper balls at my back, and bully me because I only had three shirts and two pairs of pants. When I got home, I cleaned out my grandmother’s bed pan, poured her fresh juice, opened the window to the foggy New York air, and sat by her bedside, holding her calloused, yet delicate hands in mine, tracing the maze of blue and green veins branching under her translucent skin.

One day, while sitting with her, I got so frustrated with the big English words in my literature book that I screamed and slammed it on the floor. My grandmother, who had just drifted into sleep, awoke, startled by the noise. Immediately, I regretted doing so. She laughed quietly and beckoned for me to sit next to her on the bed and began telling me a story. It was about a little boy who did terribly in school and would come home every day, crying to his mother, telling her his dreams would never come true. But his mother never gave up on him and encouraged him to keep trying, and eventually that boy grew to be a very successful man. “That man your father,” she finished, her eyes glistening with nostalgic tears. “Never give up, my young Aaliya, the path to success never was straight.” So, I picked the book up off the floor, lay it on my lap, and began reading out loud to my grandmother, who listened intently. She liked how the words sounded coming out of my mouth. The cadence, the rhythm, the beat of syllables was synonymous with the faint beating of her heart, though both of us were oblivious to the meaning of the text.

From that day on, there was nothing I looked forward to more than coming home from school and listening to my grandmother’s stories. At one point she had told so many, I began writing them down, word for word, in case I ever forgot. For those brief two hours after school, before my parents got home from work, our otherwise hollow apartment filled up with the creativity of my grandmother’s tales, as my pen skated along the sheets of my notebook. It was our little sanctuary, void of the troubles and worries of the world. 

When I began high school, my grandmother’s health took a turn for the worst. Almost every day, she was rushed to the emergency room and the doctors prescribed her one expensive drug after the other. Soon, our savings ran so low that some nights we slept without eating supper. I could understand my parents’ frustration; sleeping on an empty stomach was not what they had had in mind when they had come to America: what happened to the streets paved in gold? But what I perhaps missed the most were the stories my grandmother told. Now, when I came home, she was usually sleeping or too ill to speak. Without her reassuring words, her tales of inspiration, I felt more vulnerable to my classmates’ taunts and high school became a nightmare.

There were some days when she was able to speak and for those days she asked me to take the stairs, two at a time, so we wouldn’t waste a minute. “I don’t have much time,” she whispered. Her every breath became valuable; my trembling hands, barely gripping the pen, mimicked hers, as I feverishly wrote down everything she said.  My father began coming home less and less, my mother barely came out of her bedroom; it was as my grandmother and I were the sole inhabitants of the apartment. I still came home and poured out my worries, my frustration, my confusion to her, and she listened intently, although she didn’t understand American customs.

The last time I spoke to my grandmother was in the spring of senior year. I came home with an acceptance letter to Yale University clutched tightly in my hands. I had tried not crease the envelope nor the letter too much. I had read and reread it so many times, but I was still in disbelief. A girl like me, who still didn’t understand idioms and colloquilisms, who had a dying grandmother, whose family didn’t even own a car despite having lived almost a decade in America, was here holding an acceptance letter to an Ivy League school with a full scholarship. I remember taking the stairs two at a time, rushing into my grandmother’s bedroom and telling her. She just sat there, unblinking. My smile disappeared. “Grandmother, are you alright? Did you take your medicine?” I asked.

“Yes, Aaliya, I am fine, but this letter means you will have to go far from me soon. Who will take care of me then? Who will listen to my foolish stories?” tears streamed down her face. I realized I was seeing my grandmother cry for the first time. She outstretched her arm and I collapsed on to the bed, the acceptance letter drifted to the floor, forgotten.  “Grandmother, as long as you’re here, I will never leave you,” I promised. “No, Aaliya, it is time for you to begin your future, realize your dream. You earned it. My blessings are always with you,” she replied.

That evening, both my parents returned from work in a jovial mood. My mother had gotten a raise from the factory bought a decent dinner for the first time in months. As we sat down to eat, I remembered my acceptance letter and went to my grandmother’s room to retrieve it, it was still on the floor next to her bed. I picked it up and glanced at Grandmother’s face, it seemed to glow with a tranquility I envied. My parents were elated to hear about my acceptance and together we prayed for my success and Grandmother’s health. For once, everything seemed perfect.

The next day I left early from school. My grandmother’s sorrowful words of me leaving still echoed in my head. I took the stairs two at a time to our apartment, went into my grandmother’s room and found her in the same position as I had seen her last night, except now she was not breathing. I shook her a few times, lifting one limp arm, then the other, discovering my notebook of stories wedged under her arm. I opened it to the last piece of advice my grandmother had given me: “Denial is the greatest obstacle to success. Accept your fate and move on.”

Of course there is a void where my grandmother once used to be. Her stories, her values, her life lessons were the foundation of my character. But the most I can do for her now is continue to defy the odds, continue to succeed, continue to leave my own legacy. One day I want someone to listen to my stories, write them down, implement them. Every now and then as I walk down the narrow streets of New York, I hear her words of wisdom echoing off the buildings, suspended among the skyscrapers. And I always take the stairs, two at a time, just so I don’t miss anything.

                                                                                                                  

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